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SW Episode III - Reign of the Dark Side (* unfinished project *) — Page 3

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bobgarcia74 said:

But I do ask that you provide some feedback. Likes, dislikes and such.

Likes: Romantic dinners, long walks on the beach, and porn.

Dislikes: Restraining orders.

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I know it may not be my place, but I would love to review it, too...

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vaderios said:

Just if you missed that i ve spot some shit here and there that you might want to fix/eliminate from your edit:

Quote myself

-Angel

Random nitpick, but why does he still have eyelashes?

"Reality leaves a lot to the imagination." – John Lennon

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bobgarcia74 said:

rpvee, I finished the second draft of my edit, I'm PMing links to the people that I asked to help me review it.  Thats all.

 

Asteroid-man. Not sure what you mean when you say you're " looking for a good ROTS edit for ESB:Ren". Do you mean a good edit to watch along with yours".

Anyways, PM me your email when you can  Asteroid and I'll send the links. But I do ask that you provide some feedback. Likes, dislikes and such.

ESB:Ren is The Empire Strikes Back: Renascent ;)

Star Wars Renascent

Inspired by the Godfather Part II and a revamp of Star Wars: Reborn

View the discussion thread

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Thanks captain! :)

Im happy i was constructive and helpful as possible.

Till the next feedback ;)

 

-Angel

–>Artwork<–**

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I haven't watched it yet....... I'll get to it ASAP, though, I promise!!!

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Bob... Been a long weekend... But I finally came back to my computer, ready to view this cut, only to find part 24 was damaged... I'm currently re-downloading. But that shouldn't take long... I hope to give you my thoughts today. Sorry, man!

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Alrighty, Bob... You have a PM... Sorry it took so long.

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Read, and thanks Benj. Looking like it might be going into the final draft very soon here. Getting very close.

 

Everyone else who asked to do a review, can you please respond with your review by April 3rd? I'm taking a few days break to clear me head. Then I plan on getting this reworked and complete. I might do some minor fixes here and there for now. But after the 3rd I'm pretty much gonna lock myself into the responces that I've recieved at that point. Using the ideas that I felt were good enough to warrant a change to the second draft.

TY

Bob Garcia

 My Episode 3 Edit Reign of the Dark Side

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I'll watch it Friday and just list all my little nitpicks as I go along, haha. That OK?

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I might suggest the next second draft is in an Avi version so it will be more easy to the free/slow internet users.

still with the avi you may add 720p samples for the new effects presentation and quality control :)

 

-Angel

–>Artwork<–**

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Thats cool rpvee. Thats all I really need. Different people have different views. Just trying to collect a few views, for the stuff I might have missed.

Just cause I like the way something is edited doesnt mean everyone else does 8)

 My Episode 3 Edit Reign of the Dark Side

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I have watched the clips available on youtube and I'm very impressed at the quality of this edit and look forward to when this will be available to everyone.

The editing of the scenes by trimming a few lines or seconds here and there and repositioning some of the shots gives it a whole new and better feel.

The red lightsaber for Anakin works really well in the story and changes his lord vader character into a true Sith. I'm sure they left it blue to explain Luke's lightsaber in ANH but Obi-Wan had plenty time to put in a new crystal by then.

Fanatastic work thank you!

 

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bobgarcia74 said:

Thank you rpvee for your detailed review. Awsome work. Helping me a ton.

Not a problem!

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Ok, its April 3rd and I'm back in full swing editing this for what will be the final version.

All those who sent back a review, Thank you very much. Anyone who hasnt sent back in a review, if you can do so by tomorrow, that'll be sweet.

 My Episode 3 Edit Reign of the Dark Side

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Vaderios. I'm currently working on some of the effects. You mentioned a backdrop for dooku's new door that I made. Been looking all over for good replacement footage, so far this is something I tryed. Was going for a engine room effect. It's a quick clip.

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NK7YZ3NG-CA

 

If you can think of something better let me know. I can pan and crop whatever, no problem. Just looking for specific ideas

 My Episode 3 Edit Reign of the Dark Side

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Heyyyyy you cut the banter!!!!! :D

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Nice with the door there bob. You are a real Bob the builder right ? :D

A suggestion, to make the door closes slower matches with the other doors in the ship.

I will bother with this concept when i have PS. I hope is no urgent

 

-Angel

–>Artwork<–**