Ok, I took a whack at fixing the whole scene. Here’s the original version I did:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SCOsWi3-Eso
The Cars song was too loud, plus the original score is also there, so the whole thing is hard to follow. I lowered the song volume, as well as moving it where the chorus fills in a gap between dialogue, and also reduced the song volume further when there is dialogue versus where there is no volume. I then removed the R/L and SR/SL channels completely to remove the score, so it wouldn’t clash with the song. Unfortunately there is a lot of that score in the center channel as well, so I used the noise reduction trick on the center channel. It does result in the dialogue sounding a bit tinny but the score is barely noticeable so I think it’s worth it.
Let me know what you think, I think it’s much improved.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xm6Mm286JHg