darth_ender said:

Good man, MrInsaneA! I really appreciate it. You should have a PM in your inbox shortly. Let me know if I can help in any way.

Oh this is Good News.... GO MR.INANSEA!!! I am still mocking up some visuals for the begining and will focus finishing it off over the weekend if possible.... It will be for the purposes to display different Ideas and suggestions..... already in the running and amalgamations or augmented suggestions. It will be somewhat crude and I understand that to sell an idea it should be done to perfection but I simply do not have the time to do all this stuff to perfection or have the skill but will do somthing to try and show alot of different ideas incorporated into the first act. And it will be up to you if you think it would work done that way or think it could be done another way better. Or simply leave things alone.

your probably right about the positioning of the tie-fighters would probably break the flow... And where you suggest it should go will probably work better.

VADER BREAKING THE GLASS LANDING PLATFORM

I also wanted to say that if you watch my rough cut 2nd version of the final act I did a mock-up of when Vader breaks the glass and I was pruposing that it would be after he finishes talking to luke when he is alone and he it goes inbetween seeing vader being assembled on the operating table and the cuts back to the landing platform glass corridor. What? Yes Vader on the operating table.... Did you watch it?

It was meant to be a reaction to Luke saying "then my father is truly dead...."

So please check this again... I thought it was an interesting idea and was not too poorly executed but you would have to imagine the glass cracking behind him as that would be CGI Effect.

There are also cut suggestions to the Father & Son dialogue which I think is a definate improvement also.