Now what I think we should do is have everyone who's interested in contributing ideas make suggestions for alterations or additions. The more I think about it, the less interested I am in filming whole new scenes or subplots (I know Ronster will hate me for this :) But it's up to you guys.
I hate you! lol don't be silly mate, I don't want to suggest anything just for the sake of it... I think you will either need to pad out the begining if you keep the structure the way it is Dagobah > VaderDSII > Tattooine or revert to the original structure of ROTJ.... Just my thoughts on this ....
Ok read the script it is largely agreeable to me on the whole as I pointed out already to you previously there is too much flitting around which IMO hampered the original in many ways in terms of pace so not only is it hard to read the last act but also hard to know if your pruposed structure will work so do a rough cut of it IMO. My main concern is the Pacing and this is what needs to be addressed above anything else. For example getting the Emporers death out of the way helps move on to what is going on elsewhere instead of staggering everything out with constant breaks to somthing else before finishing any one particular sequence. It's like being at a checkout counter and the person that serves you go's to do somthing else before finishing the transaction. I can see why they cut the Jerjerrod scenes as it is yet another cut away to somthing else going on in another place. Please I would like to see a rough cut of the last act, you might even change your mind once you do it.....
Can you remove C3PO Lines "I have decided that we will stay here" outside the bunker it's annoying.
Can you remove Luke to Vader "I feel the conflict within you, let go of your hate" it feels too forced and does not add anything to this scene.
I would like to see Luke not tell Leia that she is her brother so I would like that removed and leave Leia in the dark about this fact but thats my take....
I like what you did with Vader contacted Luke whilst Tied up on Endor would perhaps go better there. than on tattooine.
Hard for me to know about the deleted scenes as do not have the blu-ray yet. But would add more tension trying to blow up endor but that would also be a bit suicidal too.
Lando should probably burn out after the destruction of DSII but would need to be made spectacular.
Use more Endor celebration footage from the original as opposed to showing celebrations around the galaxy IMO.
Can we cut Han's Jelousy immediatly after the DSII get's destroyed?
Keep the pyre on Endor... is unneccesary to have on tattooine but it might work?.
I will give it another read later on. But Good Work Darth Ender