darth_ender said:

I don't know about incorporating the Mothman into this story, as the Mothman Prophecies seem to be completely unrelated to Star Wars. Oh, wait! You mean Mon Mothma! ;)

yeah what's her name :)

I like Luke just making grand entrances all the time as part of his character. The implication that he's going to leave to go "think" is enough for me.

I've never had a problem with starting on Tatooine, so for simplicity's sake I think that would be fine

@Vladius The only problem is, is that luke is not a Jedi yet apparently.....I don't mind sticking to the original sequence... But I quite like expanding the plot regarding the Bothans... That will be my next clip for the CGI Experts, and it would make the edit unique and perhaps a wow factor there too.

do have one thing to say, since you mentioned it earlier. I like the idea of Leia's injury just before Vader taunts Luke about her joining the dark side. However, the way I conceive the battle includes the shootout in the bunker taking place after their second time getting in, which means she would be injured while they break in. Yet she would appear to be in perfectly good shape at that point. Maybe you pull it off well in your cut, but that problem occurs to me.

@Darth-Ender I changed the order only slightly to accomodate this so check the sequence could perhaps add a burn to her arm i did a quick fix on the smoke and lasers going everywhere part in you clip too but thats a cgi like the doors and chewie. although i did not tile mark it

perhaps DS1 Footage wold work of Han and Chewie legging it around the corner just before the bunker exit. Watch the sequence you would know what I mean....