Looks great! Maybe cut the Palpatine bit right after he says "ironic"...could be cool if he seems to just let his thoughts wander, leading the audience to wonder if he's reminiscing when he killed Plagueis.
Post #431384
- Author
- Darth Cadavra
- Parent topic
- SW Episode III - Reign of the Dark Side (* unfinished project *)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/431384/action/topic#431384
- Date created
- 13-Aug-2010, 9:46 PM