your ROTJ edit sounds great!! Can't wait to see where it goes!
One possible issue with it's text crawl in red. I read somewhere that when using a projection system that red text is difficult for the human eye to see well. especially against black. Someone correct me if I'm wrong. I know most of us will be watching it on laptops or TVs, but just thought I'd throw that out there.
Again, I look forward to your ROTJ edit! (and I love the ideas of going Episode-less intros!)