Pros
-Darker
-Mr. Freeze seemed scary
-less nipples, ass shots, the obvious
-Watchable
Cons
-Some rough transitions
-Plot Holes
-Little or no character development
The edit didn't explain the "love" triangle between Ivy, Batman, and Robin. Which I am sure you are aware of. Batgirl, or whoever she is, is only in the movie for a max of 3-5 minutes... why not cut her out completly? It is like "Hello" and next thing you know she is batgirl. Still a few one liners from freeze. And where did Alfred go? Why was he only on a screen Alfred is always at the mansion. I know the flick can't be perfect seeing what you have to work with, but I feel as if there still could be improvements.
Original= F
Edit= C+/B-