I REALLY like the concept of what you did there. The outstretched hand is a bummer though.
And now to think of it…you can really use those shots of Luke contacting Leia to make him do anything across the universe with the force in this movie. The sequence works perfectly for that purpose. The question is where it can be best used and I gotta say, this is a great option.
Good work and I’m looking forward to the rest of your edit.