Thanks for the thumbs up, I’m glad I got it right!
No Leaf Joke
-Cut from Rey saying “Okay” to Luke resting her hand on the rock.
-Replaced “Reach out with your feelings” with just “Reach out”
Wow. I really enjoyed that moment in the theater, but my goodness, it really does play out better like this. You’ve convinced me.
Here’s another attempt, this time trying to include the shot of Luke discarding the reed he is shown holding. I submit it to get a sense of whether people think the shot is better in or out.
https://vimeo.com/265385058
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