Ahh, it’s getting there, it just needs some tweaking to make it sound a bit more natural. I wonder too if using a data base of all vader quotes to get some letters/sounds that flow better to make it natural. It would need to be taken from ESB and ROTJ as opposed to ANH.
Yeah, still room for improvement. Using parts of other quotes might work, this is probably the best I can do using only the Bible reading.