I need some feedback on my idea for the attack before I actually get the wonderful voice actor to record the lines.

The Endor moon serves as a refueling and repair depot for the dreaded Imperial Starfleet. A successful attack on the moon’s facilities will strike a real blow to the Imperial war-effort, and will bring the rebellion one step closer to winning the war. However, before a full attack on the moon, a strike team headed by General Solo will need to deactivate the planetary defense shield.

I feel like for this movie to have any meaning in a hypothetical universe after it, the Rebels should manage to blow up the factory. Perhaps the Executor (after the Emperor’s death) could blow up and fall planet-ward- destroying the repair facility.

I also feel like the Rebel fleet scene I’ve been showing you is too… empty? I feel like it would be really upsetting to see that the Rebellion has only like 3 corvettes and Home One left. Perhaps I should take an idea from Rebels and have it be mentioned that the fleet we see in the movie is only one cell of the larger Rebel Alliance. This would also explain why Dodanna and Rieekan aren’t present in the movie- their cells are off doing other things. This also makes the ending of the light-hearted family action movie less depressing.

Another Idea: Perhaps Ackbar dies and Madine is the one to survive?