I briefly resumed working on this script during my hiatus from the forum, but placed it back on the back burner when I decided I wasn’t finished revising my Ep. I & II rewrites. After over a month of work, as of last night, I’ve finished the final* revisions to The New Dawn. 26 pages have been shaved from the script, with most of the dream sequences/Force visions cut out; I also made a number of less significant changes, such as to dialogue and character names.

I’m now returning to Knight of the Empire. In addition to deleting filler material and the like, I plan on making alterations to the depiction of the Sith, as well as keeping Dahlia alive. Once that’s all finished — within a month’s time, at the earliest — I’ll try getting back to work on A Lost Hope for real.

*I’ve said that before.