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Post #1173865

Author
HerekittykittyX
Parent topic
Revenge of the Jedi (The Snooker edit) (Cancelled: *unfinished project *)
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Date created
21-Feb-2018, 3:07 PM

Zachary VIII said:

HerekittykittyX said:

Here what i would say in the crawl.

Episode 6 Revenge of The Jedi

The Rebellion Needs Han Solo To Survive! Meanwhile Vader and The Empire Are Searching to the end of the galaxy for Luke Skywalker after he slipped thorough the Fingers Of Lord Vader.

2 Months After The Shocking betrayal at the hands of Lando Calrissian. Luke Skywalker has returned to his home planet of Tatooine and is Waiting for The arrival of the Millennium Falcon. Luke Skywalker and The Rebellion had just finished there preparations to rescue the charming Han Solo from
The Evil Gangster Jaba the Hutt…

The number and paragraphs and paragraph structure is way off, I know that RotJ was the one whose crawl diverged the most from the traditional style, but this is too much.

This isn’t a final Draft this is just a pitch so he can get a general idea.