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Post #1170292

Author
OutboundFlight
Parent topic
Return of the Jedi: A Gentle Pruning (* unfinished project *)
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Date created
12-Feb-2018, 9:42 AM

May I suggest you cut all of the Emperor’s scenes before the confrontation? Neither of the scenes add anything besides the Enperor bossing Vader around (which sort of diminishes his character). With constant allusions to the Emperor (Moff being scared, Yoda’s warning) there would be a lot more tension when Luke meets him if we haven’t either. It would let the audience build him up throughout the movie.