Is it too late to suggest an alteration in the opening crawl? A minor thing, just the way the first paragraph is structured.
Instead of “In the decade following the Invasion of Naboo, dissidence has fragmented the galaxy. Over a thousand solar systems have revolted against the Republic.” Make it “Dissidence has fragmented the galaxy. In the decade following the invasion of Naboo, over a thousand solar systems have revolted against the Republic.”