You’d just need to provide an alternate backstory to Owen and Beru to explain why Luke is left in their care. Honestly, it makes more sense for them to be unrelated to Anakin, given that hiding him with his blood relatives isn’t really hiding him at all. I recommend making Beru Obi-Wan’s sister.
Fine idea, but how does one go about doing that in a reedit? Hmm, even as I was writing that it occurred to me that I can do a pretty good Yoda impression, and could possibly dub the line, “Your sister on Tatooine, perhaps,” with the camera on Obi-Wan.
Thanks for the feedback guys. I’m gonna go with that crawl but will likely drop the mention of Grievous. I just rewatched the opening scene of Revenge, and had forgot how cringe-worthy So many lines were.
So I’m going to cut the scene at Anakin’s beheading of Dooku. AND, I’ll have him do it all on his own with no prompting from Palpatine. In this reedit, Anakin’s just (a) a supporting character, and (b) a bad seed. One of Obi-Wan’s lines pretty much tells the tale: “His training has made him arrogant.”