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Post #1165690

Author
CamSMurph
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ANDREAS presents: Prisoner of Azkaban & Order of the Phoenix [REVISITED] (Released)
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Date created
31-Jan-2018, 1:14 PM

Anjohan said:

CamSMurph said:

Truth be told, the scene at the staircase never really worked for me.

But why? Line delivery? Behaviour? I’m eager to know.

Does anyone else find this scene bad?

Well, the scene played out a little weak to me. I guess a little more could’ve been added to that short moment before Harry leaves. Plus, a rather unnecessary mention of Hogwarts’ restriction of underage wizardry.

I completely understand if you feel you want to leave this scene in. It’s only my suggestion.