Ok here’s the 3rd part i’m working on. I was trying to get someone to do finn…but i haven’t got anyone…but i think i might have found a good voice for him. Again this is not the final edit/dub…its a work in progress. So any tips or thoughts so far would be great.
originally i had was going to show Rey, BB8 and Finn running away from the ‘cops’ and get off the planet, which you can see my rough edit of that here…
But i figured it was just wasted time…the next scene on the star destroyer they going to say ‘they escaped’ so i just wanted to get to the next scene faster…no point of showing it, and its not like new information was gonna be shown…point is…they escape.
So the next scene like i mentioned with show the Star Destroyer, but i’m showing it as if its a police space station. They’ll get the report about the bank robbers and then Kylo walks in (as a fun boss) who wants to play music on the bridge and this is interested to find out the escape ship was the Millennium Falcon.