Really good crawl, but saying “the WORLD is become undone” seems a bit silly. Like when Padme says “this is a real world, Anakin” in AotC.
Post #1156469
- Author
- TK-422
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- Rogue One: A Star Wars Story - Fan Edit Ideas thread...
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- 10-Jan-2018, 9:09 AM