Good points, everyone. As I’ve said, the Rathtars will be reduced but not eliminated.

On the subject of the crawl, here’s another attempt, taking into consideration the previous suggestions:

The galaxy is in peril.
Far from the worlds
of the New Republic,
a sinister FIRST ORDER
is building a weapon that
can devour entire stars.

Haunted by visions of
this devastating weapon,
the disgraced Republic
General Leia Organa
mobilizes her remaining
officers to form a brave
resistance to this deadly
threat.

As evil gathers above him,
Leia’s most daring pilot has
found a clue to the location
of her long-lost brother,
the last of the Jedi Knights
and their only hope to save
a galaxy from war…