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Post #1139296

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NeverarGreat
Parent topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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Date created
6-Dec-2017, 10:33 PM

I just noticed a potential issue in the escape from Jakku. After they go to hyperspace, Finn tells Rey that ‘we need to get out of this system’. Yet presumably they’ve already left the system, so Finn’s not making a lot of sense. I played around with some dialogue changes, but it’s probably better to just cut the line.

If people think it’s a problem, that is.