Might be good to keep a mention of the resistance for clarity.
“Good, then we will crush the resistance before they get to Skywalker. Prepare the weapon.”
That would do it. Keeps it concise and flows well.
Post #1137586
- Author
- jarbear
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- TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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- Date created
- 3-Dec-2017, 3:29 PM