Nothing wrong with suggestions, people voicing them are good since it gives the project leader some thoughts or points that he/she may agree with and implement them.
Anyway, if there is to be more work down the road with this project, such as a V3, an aspect I liked about Digmod’s edit was the removal of Finn in the TIE shooting the troopers on the deck. He JUST decided to leave the order and his comrades. Would a person that quickly attack and kill his fellow troopers that quickly?
Later on after some time, and being chased by the order on Jaku by trooper and TIES, now it would make more sense for him.
My personal thought … well, obviously first done by Digimod!