I’d probably go with the restructuring approach for Starlight, but at least the new Snoke scene keeps everything else in place.
I definitely think you should! I was originally unsure about the idea but your most recent versions have shown that it could work really well. I think your other idea, the brief Snoke scene, has an efficient, less is more, approach that fits with trying to keep this edit focused on supplementing the main change while preserving as much of the theatrical version as possible. Also, your new hyperspace shots feel super professional. Great work on that.
And Hal, if that doesn’t work I do think the dialogue would still work fine as is. Just thought it might be worth another go.
Also, was the idea of having Ackbar report to the fighters that the Oscillator was still functioning scrapped, or just put in a different place?