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Post #1136144

Author
jarbear
Parent topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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Date created
29-Nov-2017, 12:40 PM

I think the transitions for 2/3 work pretty well. I do agree with Neverar the transition from Han to Rey is a bit tight. I think his solution using the ties would work well, it establishes well to the scene jump.