I think the transitions for 2/3 work pretty well. I do agree with Neverar the transition from Han to Rey is a bit tight. I think his solution using the ties would work well, it establishes well to the scene jump.
Post #1136144
- Author
- jarbear
- Parent topic
- TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1136144/action/topic#1136144
- Date created
- 29-Nov-2017, 12:40 PM