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Post #1134888

Author
Sir Ridley
Parent topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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Date created
25-Nov-2017, 4:35 AM

That’s great! 😄 I only have a few tiny problems with the sound. First, when she says “immediately”, the beginning of the word is a bit odd. It’s a bit long so it sounds like “eeemidiately” or perhaps “idimediately”. And the background rumbling connected to her words could be extended so they don’t start and stop as she speaks. And then after she says “insane” it’s as if the background noise drops out for a bit and then kicks back in just before “or maybe they do”.