True to my word, I’ve rewritten my prior entries. The heaviest revisions were to the second entry; the tension between characters had been made less verbal, and the son Dwayne has been jettisoned from the plot altogether.
Post #1129572
- Author
- DuracellEnergizer
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- 13 O'Clock (An Original Story) *CANCELLED(?)*
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- Date created
- 12-Nov-2017, 7:54 PM