Post #1118240

Author: MalàStrana
Parent topic: TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
Link to post in topic: https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1118240/action/topic#1118240
Date created: 14-Oct-2017, 8:19 AM

NeverarGreat said:

Here’s the mockup, with significantly streamlined subtitles: https://vimeo.com/238169635
Password: finn

Another even more blunt possibility is:
“I hear you’re looking for some labor.”
“Yes, but you need not fear the First Order here.”
“It’s neutral ground.”

Why not a clearer “The First Order would never come here” ?