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Post #1117951

Author
Sir Ridley
Parent topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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Date created
12-Oct-2017, 7:33 PM

That’s a nice idea. Personally I don’t think that exposition needs to be there, but using that deleted scene for such a thing is something to consider.

If the scene would be used to explain the lack of panic and the no-violence policy I think it would have to be stated more clearly than in your example dialogue, though.