One real suggestion - remove Ackbar’s first line ‘You can see here the Death Star orbiting the forest moon of Endor’. It’s technically incorrect, since the Death Star must remain above the shield generator. Also, he repeats the info about the forest moon later, so nothing is lost.
Post #1115647
- Author
- NeverarGreat
- Parent topic
- STAR WARS: EP VI -RETURN OF THE JEDI "REVISITED EDITION"ADYWAN - ** PRODUCTION HAS NOW RESTARTED **
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1115647/action/topic#1115647
- Date created
- 6-Oct-2017, 10:24 PM