These suggestions are going nowhere. I don’t know how many of these shots will be kept in the edit, but maybe these suggestions might help
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=A8dJlP_yFTI
Also (I didn’t see this listed anywhere or if it was already discussed) the scene when Obi-wan tells Luke about his sister, I would suggest if his force ghost be enhanced with the force glow like in TESB:R and maybe at the ending too with Obi-wan, Anakin (Sebastian Shaw), and Yoda.