Once Adywan omits the scene with Luke asking Leia if she remembers her real mother in ROTJ: Revisited, then Padme can die in Revenge of the Sith.
I like what you did, except I didn’t like the audio cuts during Luke and Leia’s birth, and to be honest, I would show Leia’s birth, but I would somehow cut away from her being named. I would just have Bail saying he would take the girl. The reveal will be at the end of Rogue One, oh, it’s Leia, it’s the girl, but only to the audience. If you didn’t get it then, you’ll certainly get it by ROTJ.
I liked the inclusion of Qui-gon, I’ve heard it in another edit before.
The Luke Leia theme didn’t really work that well, as the music cues are off or out of place, if you will. I prefer the original Leia theme.
Also, I do like Vader’s helmet going on, he breathes, then that’s it. It would be cool to hear the Emperor say to Vader, “Lord Vader” right before he breathes out, Idk.
I like it overall, it’s a different take on the ending. You did a great job.