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Post #1107507

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Sir Ridley
Parent topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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Date created
13-Sep-2017, 10:43 AM

It’s a fun idea, but I feel like if she heard the senate do that it would be strange in that situation to “not care” (and for Kor Sella to smile).

Another option would be to cut her last line and just leave it at “not all the senators think I’m crazy” followed by Kor Sella’s smile.