I think that’s very good the way it is; I agree with placing her reaction at the end, as the deleted scene itself has a very abrupt ending cut.
Post #1107496
- Author
- Hal 9000
- Parent topic
- TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1107496/action/topic#1107496
- Date created
- 13-Sep-2017, 9:21 AM