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Post #1101582

Author
Jeebus
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The Prequels: Show, Don't Tell (A short film) (Workprint available)
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Date created
24-Aug-2017, 6:49 PM

That’s creative, and it sounds like it works. But, and I don’t mean to nitpick here, what do you imagine Anakin was going to say before he was cut off? Everything I came up with sounded kind of clunky (“How can you be on the council and not be able to use the force to it’s fullest potential?”), but if you were to cut it off after ‘you’, it leaves you more possibilities (“How can you let someone die when you have the power to save them?”, “How can you expect me to let someone die when I know I can save them?” and so on).