I like the colors!
I’d add a grain plate or something to hide the wound shot - which is clearly perceived as upscaled, while, for example, the shot shot (pun intended!) is so fast that passes unnoticed.
Also, is it me, or, after the ship arrival, there are some shots present in the original, and missing in your version?
It would be nice to have a left/right (or top/bottom) comparison clip - using black for missing shots; so, we can have a more clear idea of the before/after.