I liked it! Can’t remember the original version exactly - I watched it few years ago - but your version worked very well, as it’s seamless (apart the repeated frame that was fixed as you wrote); that’s a bit like the best CGI effect, when you can’t say if/when it was used - it means it works!

Some notes:

colors: I like them!
subtitles: I like them out of the picture - probably I’m one of the few, though… don’t know if you plan to hardcode them, but I’ll go soft.
problem: the first shot after the credit (the car) is affected by deinterlacing artefacts.
hint: I’d stretch horizontally the first credits - the one you used with starfield as background - to resamble better the following credits font size and aspect ratio.