Perhaps it’s just me, but your crawl wording is great with one exception. I would suggest “Imperial” be added before Director Krennic.
Post #1090122
- Author
- nightstalkerpoet
- Parent topic
- Rise of the Rebellion: A Rogue One Edit (Released)
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- Date created
- 14-Jul-2017, 5:42 PM