Can you give us a full proposed cut list. I can’t tell what your vision for the story is so it’s kind of hard to help out.
The task of Vader’s No scream replacement is going to be pretty difficult to do and produce anything that will be clear enough for a final mix.
Do you need this scene? There are some scenes in Field of Dreams where he is angry when Frank first knocks on his
door if you’re looking for something for him to say.