I would re-add the “Looks like our friends got in.” line, but otherwise that’s pretty good.
The two Ackbar lines still sound slightly different, but it’s very close by now.
Post #1086008
- Author
- Kexikus
- Parent topic
- TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1086008/action/topic#1086008
- Date created
- 26-Jun-2017, 3:39 AM