Here’s my best attempt at implementing a revised X-wing sequence with Ackbar. Same as before, not perfect, but I don’t think anything stands out in a bad way.
https://vimeo.com/221590694
password: radio
I agree with Sir Ridley that Ackbar’s voice, at least in the shot from Poe’s X-Wing should sound more radio-processed. Also, I’d cut the “Black leader, there’s a brand new hole in that oscillator.” No reason to state that if Ackbar has just said the exact same thing. “Looks like our friends got in.” makes for a better response to Ackbar’s line.