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Post #1080678

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Smithers
Parent topic
The Prequel Radical Redux Ideas Thread
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Date created
1-Jun-2017, 11:29 PM

IsanRido said:

Transfer all of Anakin’s anger from Obi-Wan to Mace Windu. For instance, his response to Padme’s “you are more mature now” could easily be edited to “Master Windu manages not to see it”. Cut his rant. This could tie with Windu’s distrust of Anakin in the first film, and would pay off when he gets his hand chopped off. This way you can retain a good friendship with Obi-Wan and frustration with the Council.

Good example of the line change there, I like it!