Just watched this. Great job!
I’d definitely use the Luke/Vader scene on Endor as the opening scene. It sets everything up and explains what’s going on quickly.
I’d also cut the celebration stuff. It has nothing to do with what we’ve been watching. I’d fade out as the camera pans up from the pyre. You loose the ghosts, but it’s already clear that Vader has redeemed himself. The story seems over at the pyre.
Just suggestions. Thanks for sharing this!
Post #1080558
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- ray_afraid
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- Return of the Jedi: Vader and Luke - (Return of the Jedi edited into a short film)
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- 1-Jun-2017, 5:53 PM