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Post #1074030

Author
Ronster
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4K restoration on Star Wars
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Date created
7-May-2017, 3:51 PM

I think really it boils down to neither we grew up with (which I think is more precise) than that started it all.

I honestly think the best language is “something unforgettable that we remember.”

I think this is far more clear and precise and to the point. But I don’t mean to be rude or critical I just think something along those lines would explain it better and it is very simple.

That should be a simple strong sentence no more.

“Today is the 40th Anniversary of Star Wars something unforgettable we remember” (next Paragrapgh)

Scrub 2nd paragraph (delete) go straight on with 3rd paragraph talking about memories.

Then leave the rest as is.

That’s my take