If I could manipulate Kylo’s line to be ‘You will give the map to me’ then Rey’s appropriation of that sentence structure in the next scene would make a lot more sense. If that worked, I doubt that I would keep the split scenes, and would settle for a more subtle edit in this section.
I think this is the best solution. Better to change less if possible rather than more. Kylo already “kind of” says it, like, “And now you’ll give it to me.” Maybe the proceeding back and forth, battle of the wills, that they have going on, you could fit in the line, “You will give me the map” or a similar phrase during that back and forth. It would help parallel Rey’s attempt, who also repeats the phrase until it works.