It’s a nice idea. I think splitting the interrogation mostly works fine, but splitting the Jedi mind trick feels a bit weird. She knows what she’s trying to do and just fine tunes it on the spot, so it makes sense to just try again until it works. And the small part of the first try feels a bit short and disjointed, as well as going in between what would have been a nice transition from Han and Leia believing there is good in their son to Kylo fearing that same thing.
Post #1069566
- Author
- Sir Ridley
- Parent topic
- The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1069566/action/topic#1069566
- Date created
- 25-Apr-2017, 5:19 AM