All I can say is that the Hux-Snoke scene feels pretty short, and the jump to Hux saying to the crew to fire the weapon, was a (too) quick jump (at least for me). Also, the jump from ‘‘bring her to me’’ to the next scene feels, wierd (maybe a wipe like in old sw movies?), and the finn hugging rey feels abrupt too. Other than that, this could work for me.
Thanks for taking your time to check it out, I wasn’t sure if anyone would actually bother.
I’ll see what I can do to fix these quick jumps. It’s been difficult due to whats avalible but i’m sure there will be something I can use to correct it. Thank you very much!
You’re welcome, always glad to see new approaches of Star Wars and also always wanting to help
About the wipes, i think only one could work, they werent that many on the original ones, but where for “big” jumps from time/space, like on the Jedi deleted scene, from Vader on his chamber to Luke on a Tatooine cave