All I can say is that the Hux-Snoke scene feels pretty short, and the jump to Hux saying to the crew to fire the weapon, was a (too) quick jump (at least for me). Also, the jump from ‘‘bring her to me’’ to the next scene feels, wierd (maybe a wipe like in old sw movies?), and the finn hugging rey feels abrupt too. Other than that, this could work for me.
Post #1069232
- Author
- Edezio Enk'or Valorum
- Parent topic
- TFA Edit – Finn Saves Rey
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1069232/action/topic#1069232
- Date created
- 24-Apr-2017, 11:41 AM