The pacing of the scenes feels too conflicting. It worked in ROTJ because the dialogue of the Emperor was describing the action we were seeing. These are disconnected and feel like they are competing, imho.
Post #1064191
- Author
- DigMod
- Parent topic
- TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1064191/action/topic#1064191
- Date created
- 9-Apr-2017, 10:15 PM